Ukwakhiwa komdwebo "Usuku Lokusihlwa" nguN. P. Krymov

Abafundi besikole samabanga aphansi banezabelo eziningi ngokwengeziwe ezixhunywe ngobuciko nokucabanga okuzimele. Enye yalezi zakhiwo zemibukiso "Ngobusuku Busihlwa." Uma umsebenzi onjalo wanikezwa ekhaya, abazali kufanele batshele ingane izici eziyinhloko zokwethulwa kwemicabango, ukuze indodana noma indodakazi ibhale phansi ukwakheka kalula ngangokunokwenzeka.

Iyini ukubunjwa komdwebo "Usuku lokuhlwa kweBusika"

Lona kanye igama elithi "ukwakheka" likhuluma ngokwalo. Lo msebenzi uhilela ukuhlaziywa kwemicabango yabo, okuvela lapho bebuka isithombe. Ukwakhiwa komdwebo "Usuku Lokusihlwa" (N. P. Krymov) kuzovula ithuba lokubeka imibono ekuhambeni ngisho nalabo bafundi abanengqondo engabonakali. Into ebaluleke kakhulu kulo msebenzi ukuqonda ngokucacile lokho umlobi wemidwebo ayefuna ukukusho nokuthi yimiphi imizwelo ayefuna ukuyiveza ngomdwebo wakhe.

Ngakho-ke, ungesabi umsebenzi onjalo wokudala, ngoba ukwakheka komdwebo "Ubusuku Busihlwa" Krymov ebangeni lesithupha ngeke kube nzima. Kudingekile kuphela ukuhlola imininingwane yesithombe kwendwangu, futhi imicabango izogeleza emfuleni.

Uhlelo Lomsebenzi

Ukwenza kube lula ukuba ingane ibhale inhlama emdwebeni othi "Usuku lokushisa", ungamtshela ukuthi umyalelo wokuveza imicabango. Uhlelo olulinganiselwe lokuchaza isithombe lungaba okulandelayo.

Isingeniso. Nakhu kuyadingeka ukuthi ukhulume ngalokho okushiwo isithombe sonke. Yimiphi imizwelo nomzwelo emsebenzini wakhe umlobi ofuna ukukudlulisela.

Ingxenye enkulu. Umdwebo obalabala futhi ocacile womdwebo othi "Usuku Lokusihlwa" uzotholakala uma imininingwane iveza konke okudwetshiwe. Isakhiwo esifanele sale ncazelo ukubhalwa kwalokho okuvezwe ngaphambili nangemuva. Ungakhohlisi futhi ubhale izinkulumo eziyinkimbinkimbi noma amazwi angaqondakali. Ngomfundi wesibanga sesithupha, into esemqoka kulo msebenzi ukunikeza incazelo yamafomu ekhululekile yalokho akubona esithombeni.

Isiphetho. Ekupheleni kokubunjwa, ungabhala ukuthi ngabe umculi uthinte imizwa ngokudalwa kwakhe ngendwangu. Okunye okufanele ukushiwo yiloluhlobo luni lokuhamba ngemva kokushiya ngemuva kwalokho okubonile.

Loluhlelo luzosiza ingane ukuba iveze imicabango yakhe.

Yini okumelwe uyenze ngama-accents, ukuze ukwazi ukuveza okuhle okubonwayo

Yiqiniso, wonke uthisha ufuna ukubona i-essay ezwakalayo egcwele imizwa nokuqonda. Ukuze udlulise imizwa yalo kulo mbono, kufanelekile ukuchaza yonke imininingwane ebonwayo uma ubuka isithombe.

Futhi kubalulekile ukukhokha ngokukhethekile umqondo oyinhloko womculi.

Umsebenzi omuhle emdwebo othi "Usuku lokushisa" (N. P. Krymov)

Yiqiniso, kudingekile ukusebenzisa izibonelo zezincazelo ukuze uqonde ngokugcwele umsebenzi womsebenzi. Ukuze wenze lokhu, ungafunda umsebenzi oqediwe emdwebeni "Usuku lokushisa" (N. P. Krymov). Ibanga lesi-6 selivele likhona izingane ezanele ezikhulile ezingakwazi ukuveza imizwa yazo yangaphakathi futhi ziqonde ukuthi isithunzi sithombeni ngendwangu. Isibonelo, ungathatha ukudala okulandelayo.

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Ekuboneni kokuqala, isithombe "Usuku Lokusihlwa" singase sibonakale silula. Kodwa akunjalo. Eqinisweni, umculi uKrymov Nikolai Petrovich ubonisa ngokugcwele isimo sengqondo esenzeka ebusika, futhi kuyo yonke imibala idlulisele le mizwa emgqeni.

Esikhathini esingaphambili kunezinhlanzi ezinkulu zeqhwa ezivaliwe emaphandleni futhi zivimbela ngokuphelele indlela eya kubantu bakuleli. Emikhondweni enyathelisiwe abantu baya emakhaya abo ukuze bathole isikhathi sokubuyela ebumnyameni.

Ngasemuva, kungabonakala ukuthi zonke izindlu nezikhukhukazi zimbozwe ngesiliva ngeqhwa elikhanyayo. Amaqoqo anamahhashi athatha ama-brushwood ezikhungweni ukuze atshise izakhamuzi zasezindlini kulokhu kubanda. Ngokusho kwesithombe nezembatho zabantu kubonakala ukuthi iqhwa linamandla kakhulu. Ubukhazikhazi bokushona kwelanga kufana nokugubha izihlahla nokunikeza iqhwa imfihlakalo nemfihlakalo.

Ngicabanga ukuthi umbhali wakwazi ukukhombisa ngokugcwele ubusika wangempela, obungenele amalungelo futhi ubonisa ubuhle bawo kubo bonke abantu bendawo.

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Lapho ngibheka isithombe sikaNicola Petrovich Krymov, kubonakala sengathi ngingomunye wamaqhawe ale ndaba. Ngaso leso sikhathi ngizwa iphunga lokushisa, umoya we-frosty nokuzijabulisa kwezingane emaphethelweni e-snowy sweeps.

Ngaphambili, u-Nikolai Petrovich wagcizelela ukuhle, umlingo, ukukhumbuza indaba yenkathi. Ehlanganiswe ngamagquma esiliva eqhwa, ehlanganiswe nezihlahla ezibhebhethekile ezimhlophe, emigwaqweni eminyathelweni eya ezindlini, konke lokhu kufaka emkhathini wezenzakalo ezivezwe.

Ubusika esithombeni buyiqiniso, bugcwele imizwelo nemizwelo yabakhileyo bendawo. Ngemuva, ungabona ukuthi abantu bahamba kanjani ekhaya ukuhlangabezana nokushona kwelanga eduze kwehhavini elifudumele, elizoshiswa ngama-brushwood avela ehlathini. Zizwa ukufika kweholide, egcwele imikhosi yasebusika nokuzijabulisa.

Naphezu kokuthi umgwaqo ubanda kakhulu, abantu abaqinile nabasemakhaya abesabi ukuhlanganyela ebhizinisini evamile futhi bajabulele ngokugcwele izipho zemvelo.

Ukwakhiwa kobuciko "Ubusuku Busihlwa" ebangeni lesi-6

Kubalulekile ukuthi izingane zidlulise yonke imizwelo yazo eyavela lapho ibuka isithombe. Ngakho-ke, kuyakudingeka ukuba unakekele imininingwane ezosiza ukuvula ulwazi olugcwele futhi ulethe imicabango yakho. Isakhiwo esilinganiselwe somdwebo "Usuku Lokusihlwa" ngu-Krymov ebangeni lesithupha kungaba kanje.

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Lesi sithombe sikhumbuza indaba evela enkondlweni eyodwa ethandwayo:

Uphi i-droushka? Kusuka ehlathini, vesto,

Baba, uzwa, ukusika, futhi ngiyeke.

Yile migqa efika engqondweni lapho ibuka imidwebo "Ngobusuku Busihlwa."

Esikhathini esingaphambili ungacabanga ngento yangempela, ekhuphuka yonke into ngemali yesiliva nemhlophe, ebusika. Ubusika obusika baseRussia! Ezikhathini zeqhwa, ubuhle bokushona kwelanga okuzayo-kubonakala. Iqhwa lanyuka futhi likhanya ngaphansi kwemisebe yelanga. Ngifuna ngempela ukungena kulo mkhathi, kubonakala sengathi iqhwa liyomboza ikhanda, uma ulala phansi kweqhwa leqhwa.

Ngemuva, kunezindawo zokuhlala eziqhamuka eziqhingini. Abasimabhizinisi basondela ezindlini, cishe emva kokuhamba kusihlwa nomsebenzi. Amahhashi asebenza kanzima, amaphuphu aphezu kweqhwa, alethe izinkuni zasekhaya.

Konke okusesithombeni kuphefumulela umoya omusha we-frosty air futhi uvuselela. Ngakho ufuna ukugibela i-slider nge-slides, egcwele kakhulu iqhwa elikhanyayo.

Indlela yokubhala inhlawulo esithombeni

Azikho izindinganiso zokubhala ezisebenzayo. Phela, futhi kuyisici ukuze kuvezwe ngokugcwele okuhlangenwe nakho kwakho kanye nemizwelo yakho. Kuyafaneleka ukuthola ukujula kwengqondo nokugxila kulokho umculi azame ukubonisa emsebenzini wakhe.